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Merry-go-round

By: Meghan Ann Lupole


Life is like a merry-go-round,
know what I mean?
It keeps circling no matter what
horse you're riding on.

Some steeds are black,
others are white,
Some like to run,
Some prefer to trot.  

Circles and circles,
Dizzy and getting dizzier,
Hectic, yes, but it's too much fun.
Let's celebrate the horses,
Let's celebrate the carnival creatures.
Dance tonight with a carousel horse.
It's a never ending story,
Unless finally the song ends,
And you have to get off.

Some steeds are brown,
Some are gray,
Some can see, others are blind,
Some can hear, others are deaf.

I feel my heart once the song ends,
And I get in line to feel fine again.
Ride away, listen to the music.
Can't you hear the music?  
Can't you feel it too?

Some steeds can jump,
Others can barely walk,
Some steeds are old,
Others are young.  

Up and down like the crown of an ocean,
Up and down, up and down,
I feel comforted, one more time!

Some steeds are tall,
Others are short,
Some are fighters,
Others are out there dying...
Dying for another night to run.

Life's like a merry-go-round sometimes.
You never know what horse you're going to get someday.
©2005-2009 ~Carousel-Trotter
:iconcarousel-trotter:

Author's Comments

This is a different poem then what I usually write...OH WELL.


I listened to Hoeny Vanity, if you can't tell.

I'm listening to Nocturne now.

Dedicated to lovers of Carousel Ponies, , and myself.

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**snicker**

--
...You who were crushed with suffering as described by the prophet, as if he could not see the human form in You because of Your great suffering. It is in this condition, Jesus, that I love You to the point of madness.
- St. Faustina Kowalska
:iconcarousel-trotter:
Wha'chu snickering about, foo? *bursts out laughing*

--
:star:
As life flows on,

who ever will read it--
this keepsake to her
whose memory will never die?:star:
--Lady Murasaki:star:
:iconcarousel-trotter:
Maybe it's just because I've read an interesting part in Memoirs of a Geisha, but that entire poem sounds like sex.

...is that what you were snickering about?

--
:star:
As life flows on,

who ever will read it--
this keepsake to her
whose memory will never die?:star:
--Lady Murasaki:star:
:iconcandless:
Hehe. No, I was snickering about how much this song has affected you.

--
...You who were crushed with suffering as described by the prophet, as if he could not see the human form in You because of Your great suffering. It is in this condition, Jesus, that I love You to the point of madness.
- St. Faustina Kowalska
:iconcarousel-trotter:
Did the poem seem like that's what it was about, though? *nervous sweat*

--
:star:
As life flows on,

who ever will read it--
this keepsake to her
whose memory will never die?:star:
--Lady Murasaki:star:
:iconcandless:
No...**reads again**

--
...You who were crushed with suffering as described by the prophet, as if he could not see the human form in You because of Your great suffering. It is in this condition, Jesus, that I love You to the point of madness.
- St. Faustina Kowalska
:iconcandless:
Naaah.... not like sex. Even on the re-read.

--
...You who were crushed with suffering as described by the prophet, as if he could not see the human form in You because of Your great suffering. It is in this condition, Jesus, that I love You to the point of madness.
- St. Faustina Kowalska
:iconcarousel-trotter:
Okay. It must've just been what I read then. *wipes sweat off of her forehead*

--
:star:
As life flows on,

who ever will read it--
this keepsake to her
whose memory will never die?:star:
--Lady Murasaki:star:
:iconcow-bell:
I like it!!!!!!! A very clever poem! I liked especially all of the descriptions of the horses, like "some can see, others are blind....", the descriptions like that. I love this poem. I wish I could write. Makes me realize how terrible I am.

:heart:

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